Monday, June 28, 2010

Lewis' Hurricane Katrina Writing

WALT: Use descriptive language.

I am falling. My emotions are attacking my insides, bursting to get out. I watch my teddy bear slide off the broken door into the watery grave. My skin is cold. I can feel Jack Frost climbing up my bare arms. My house is dead. The wood is in a pile on the top of the poisoned water. I can feel my heart breaking. I am about to give out. Tears fall out of my eyes.

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